With swapping the Essay so far with a peer, the criteria which was ticked was :
A title
bibliography
in text citations
discussions
an adequate definition of what the topic is
the unticked criteria was:
images
a linear/historical strcuture
From the feedback it is clear that I need to add images of which relate to the essay, looking at a well known brand with their advertisement to see the changes over time, with relating to the historical events at the time. Also, the essay needs to have a better structure, with it not having a flow and needing to mention more important and clear historical changes.
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